message 1: by ~Clare~, is tired

11/02/2008 12:18PM

977943You have until Saturday afternoon to post a poem on here before the Topic changes. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. You're welcome to discuss poems on here also. 

This week's Topic is Star. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Poetry Topic Objections post. 


Poems can be as long and short as you want them to be. This is not a contest, it's just for fun and to show off our own poetry. 


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message 2: by Janelle
11/02/2008 02:06PM

1322613Star 


Sparkle, Sparkle 
Twinkle, Twinkle 
Shine so bright 
Live so high 
Standing out 
In the dark 
Inky black surrounds 

Swirling Twirling 
All around 
In your own galaxy 
You just fly 
Passing by 
Standing out 
To all 


Jump so far 
Aim so high 
Up above 
To it all 
Don’t forget 
You are my 
Little star 


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message 3: by Eric▲
11/02/2008 02:28PM

1530271STARS

Up in the night time sky,
thousands of lights fill my eye.

More than anyone can number,
and trying to just got dumber.

Giving us a glimpse of the vast unknown,
amazed at the speck of space we own.

Once thought as patternles specks,
now seen as animals or ship wrecks.

They make one wonder how
they got where they are now.

When asked "The stars are from where?"
I respond "God simply put them there!" 

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message 4: by ~Clare~, is tired
11/02/2008 03:12PM

977943cool!!! 

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message 5: by Eric▲
11/02/2008 03:19PM

1530271thank you!


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message 6: by ~Clare~, is tired
11/02/2008 03:21PM

977943Twinkle twinkle, little star, 
In my lover's eye. 
Shines so bright, 
Sucks me deep, 
So far, that I'll die! 

Kiss me, love! Make me whole, 
Love me as I love you. 
Hold me tight, 
I love you so, 
Say you love me too! 


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message 7: by OKLDvictim (last edited 11/02/2008 04:43PM)
11/02/2008 04:43PM

1323807Stars 

I wanna be a star 
I'll play the guitar 
Stars get a ton of power 
But sometimes fame is sour 

Many stars live in Hollywood 
And that is easily understood 
I want to live there too 
Instead of living in a zoo.
 

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message 8: by OKLDvictim
11/02/2008 04:44PM

1323807I love your guys's poems! 

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message 9: by Carmela
11/02/2008 05:39PM

1652055Silver light, 
Brilliant light, 
shinning down, 
throught-out the night. 

Scattered here, 
scattered there, 
Stars follow you, 
Every where! 

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message 10: by Arthur, “shakes paw on it!!”
11/02/2008 06:05PM

735341That's definitely alright! 

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message 11: by ♥Roxie♥
11/22/2008 12:23PM

1110505Shining Brightly through the trees, 
I can see a world far away... 
A world of stars, scattered throughout the sky. 
I often fly from here to there, 
So i can see the stars everywhere. 
They sparkled like diamonds, 
on that engagement ring. 
They make me so happy i could sing, 
Sing that ol' song, 
And listen to the children sing along. 
Then soon all is quiet again, 
The breeze is blowing through my hair, 
And my eyes grow week and weary, 
And asleep I fall, 
Under the stars, that sing to all... 

wow that sucked...haha 


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message 12: by ~Clare~, is tired
11/22/2008 12:31PM

977943w/e! WICKED! 
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