message 1: by Arthur, “shakes paw on it!!”
12/15/2008 09:25AM

735341Clare and I have been swapping suggestions all week, so we are a little late with poetry week. 

You have until Sunday afternoon to post a poem on here before the Topic changes. Please post it directly onto this topic, rather than posting a link. You're welcome to discuss poems on here also. 

This week's Topic is Peel. If anyone has any objections to this topic, please go to the Poetry Topic Objections post. 


Poems can be as long and short as you want them to be. This is not a contest, it's just for fun and to show off our own poetry. 

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message 2: by Janelle
12/18/2008 09:55AM

1322613I lay in bed asleep 

It’s all I can do 

Or else my skin will peel away 

My face and features change 

My heart is peeling smaller and smaller 

Falling away, to nothingness 

Everything changes 

Peel away from the old 

Myself is gone a stranger lays 

I am lost in my old skin 

It has left and is no more 

Everyone sees the new and never the old 

Never what once was 

Only what is. 


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message 3: by monolith
12/18/2008 10:17AM

1799477creeeeepy, but cool! 

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12/18/2008 02:54PM

1305317Ugly
Watching the scabs peel away
Ugly
They say how can you self-mutilate?
Ugly
This is how a soul suffocates
Ugly
Cutting takes the pain away
Ugly
Watch a soul begin to rain
Ugly
Watch the blood begin to rain
Ugly
What? What's that you say?
Ugly
Yes, I know that I'm insane
Ugly
Never suspect?
Ugly
Full of regret?
Ugly
Yeah
Ugly
I hide my fears away
Ugly
I hide my tears away
Ugly
I find solace in the blade
Ugly
Am I afraid?
Ugly
Yes
Ugly
I hate it when I feel this way
Ugly
You'd never know
Ugly
Peel my mask away
Ugly
It just might show
Ugly
All my dark days
Ugly
Cutting so deep
Ugly
I'm surprised
Ugly
My life and soul
Ugly
Didn't fly away
Ugly
What I'm trying to say
Ugly
Underneath the scars and pain
Ugly
That I'm trying to stop
Ugly
Because my addiction
Ugly
Makes me feel so
Ugly 

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12/18/2008 02:55PM

1305317so...yeah... 

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message 6: by Arthur, “shakes paw on it!!”
12/18/2008 06:53PM

735341holla canary nice poem 

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12/18/2008 07:01PM

1305317holla canary? What does that mean?

Are you talking to me? 

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message 8: by Arthur, “shakes paw on it!!”
12/18/2008 07:16PM

735341Kjersti but you can call me Captain wrote: "holla canary? What does that mean? 

Are you talking to me?"
 

yeah, nice the poem... 

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message 9: by ~Clare~, is tired
12/19/2008 08:00AM

977943LOL those were AWESOME!!! 

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12/19/2008 08:32AM

1305317*looks at Clare funny* I don't know why they would make you lol but...*shrugs*...okay 

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message 11: by ~Clare~, is tired
12/19/2008 10:39AM

977943Whoops, I am sooooo bad! its like I type those automatically! geez, I need to put myself on an LOL diet. NO MORE LOLing from clare. 

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message 12: by Arthur, “shakes paw on it!!”
12/19/2008 12:23PM

735341hum bug 

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